Welome to Totara Whānau we are a year 5 and 6 class at Oruaiti school in the Far North. Our teacher is Whaea Jorja.
The Maxx
The Maxx is a rc car that goes really fast.
It swerves and it curves while it’s tyres grips the grass.
Playing with it is a blast.
You have to be careful not to break the glass.
When the Maxx goes zooming past.
I love your limerick Liam really cool and you have so much fun playing with the Maxx
This is a cool poem Liam! It is hard to find so many rhyming words that make sense as well. I like your picture with the ramp too. Thanks for sharing your work. :)
I love your limerick Liam really cool and you have so much fun playing with the Maxx
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool poem Liam! It is hard to find so many rhyming words that make sense as well. I like your picture with the ramp too. Thanks for sharing your work. :)
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